Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

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In recent years,

enrollment

the act of enrolling

enrolment

in the STEM courses (Science, Technology, Engineering and Maths) has taken a sharp nose-dive. Every year, the universities are producing fewer and fewer STEM graduates.

This

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essay will discuss why STEM is

loosing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

its sheen and

also

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point out how it will slowly but steadily deteriorate people's standard of living. One of the main reasons why STEMP is

loosing

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

losing

its charisma is because we already invested a lot in it in the 20th Century. We even went to the moon and that was 50 years ago. In face, NASA had to stop the Apollo missions simply because there was nothing else left to explore. To put it succinctly: There

are are

a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters

are

no more hard problems left to be solved

anymore

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any more

. Another reason for

decline

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the decline

in STEM education is the aspirations of

today

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's young generation. A STEM degree

would

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Would

almost always lead to a 9-to-5 job. But

today

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's young blood doesn't like to be bossed-around.

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, they are

entreprenours

someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it

entrepreneurs

looking to start their own ventures. For that a lot of students end up taking management style courses.

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is corroborated by the fact that there has been a sudden rise in the number of universities offering MBA programs. It is unfortunate to see people being oblivious to the fact that advancements in science is the biggest factor for us

leading

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Leading

these comfortable lives

today

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. We must not stop the pedal on

science

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scientific

innovation now.

For instance

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, a recent study has revealed that an average human wastes 2 hours everyday in traffic. If we invest in the science of self-driving cars

today

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, we could very well do some

fruitfull

productive or conducive to producing in abundance

fruitful

taks

a discussion intended to produce an agreement

talks

tax

takes

in that peak traffic. To conclude, I feel that humanity needs people from all fields to make progress, be it Arts, Commerce, Sciences

etc.

Suggestion

Etc.

If any one of the cog in the wheel is broken we will surely be doomed.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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312 words

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role models
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employment
gender stereotypes
societal norms
access to information
technological stagnation
shortage
skilled professionals
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healthcare sector
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economic growth
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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on the society?

Fully explain your ideas

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Nowadays,environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual persons or individual countries in other words it is an international problem.To what extend do you agree or disagree

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