being a celebrity such as film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems

As per the life going,
evevebody
all people
everybody
wants to became a
celebbrity
a widely known person
celebrity
or famous.
there
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some
opinioun
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opinions
I have about the same. As all know there are two
side
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sides
have the coin.
here
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Here
is
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are
also
the two
seperate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
views one is,
whenever
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Whenever
a person became a celebrity
firstly
he/ she can get more money
abously
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
, As well as more popular, everyone wants to became his / her
selfy
your consciousness of your own identity
self
frame. Regularly he
/
she
ge
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
get
invited
for
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to
the functions, on reality shows, he
/
she get
chance
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the chance
a chance
to
became
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become
a headline or the maximum followers on
secial
relating to human society and its members
social
media so, who do not
wants
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want
that? But there is an negative points
also
,
Accept space
,
such
as he
/
she lost his
freedon
the condition of being free; the power to act or speak or think without externally imposed restraints
freedom
as
compair
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compare
to other people, he
/
she will not go without security.
they
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They
can not
can not
cannot
use even public transport
also
.
Coz
the fan followers came to disturb.
she
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She
/
he lost his
piecefull
not disturbed by strife or turmoil or war
peaceful
life.
they
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They
also
lost the costly family time
also
bacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
of their busy schedule. So, my thinking is that
,
Accept space
,
be a common man is good or better than the celebrity.
because
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Because
everyone can make money, we have to decide that, where we are going to stop
,
Accept space
,
get
satisfy
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satisfied
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Public scrutiny
  • Intrusive
  • Endorsements
  • Sponsorships
  • Financial security
  • High-profile collaborations
  • Social influence
  • Philanthropic efforts
  • Trust issues
  • Mental health challenges
  • Substance abuse
  • Pressures of celebrity
  • Expectations
  • Disconnect from reality
  • Normalcy
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