Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. Which do you think is the best way to choose a career? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Certain people choose
occupation
according to perks they will get out of it. Other choose a Suggestion
an occupation
job
where they love
their work
. I believe the best way to choose is to go
after what you Suggestion
going
love
and enjoy doing instead
of monetary benefits it brings with it.
As said by ex-president of India APJ. Kalam
“choose a job
you love
and you will never work
a single day in your life”. I tottally
agree with to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
totally
this
view of choosing a career
. If you love
what you are doing, it means you are pursuing your dream job
. You will put your heart & soul in your work
and you will excel not just in your field but
will Accept comma addition
field, but
also
work
for improvements in your work
. This
, in turns, will help in career
building & will eventually result in social status & monetary perks. This
way one
will achieve both personal as well as financial satisfaction resulting in self-actualization.
On the other hand
, if a person is primarily driven by social status & salary, he/she will undertake whatever pays higher. These type
of people see upward trend and rapid rise in their disposable income during Suggestion
types
early days
of their Suggestion
the early days
career
. However
, this
type
of growth is short term. They switch jobs even
for minor perks and are not loyal with Accept comma addition
jobs, even
organizations
they Suggestion
the organizations
work
in. Eventually, employers see these frequent switching of careers as negative and these type
of people face stagnation in Suggestion
types
rest
of their Suggestion
the rest
career
life. Secondly
, these type
of people become Suggestion
types
jack
of everything and master of nothing and Suggestion
a jack
thus
can’t cope with competition in specialized functions.
I would explain this
with my own example. I started my career
with a large bank doing monotnous
tasks. I did get a good tediously repetitious or lacking in variety
monotonous
salary but
I wasn’t satisfied. I got bored with my routine in just six months. I left that Accept comma addition
salary, but
job
at a bank and joined a small company as an internee but I love
the work
. Within a short span on
2 to 3 years I jumped Suggestion
of
hierarchial
levels and is now a partner in the company. classified according to various criteria into successive levels or layers
hierarchical
This
happened just because of my interest in my work
. My ex-colleagues at bank are at much lower social levels than me.
I would conclude this
essay by favoring
to choose a promote over another
favouring
furthering
career
where one
enjoy’s the work
rather then
by social status or salary. conjunction used in comparatives
than
This
way one
will not only be motivated to work
and giving his/her best but will be in better financial position
in the long run. Steve jobs was the Suggestion
a better financial position
type
of person who pursued his passion and didn’t care about money. Today he is known for innovations he gave to this
world. It is worth mentioning here that his net worth was in billions
. By pursuing Suggestion
the billions
work
which one
enjoy’s, a person is capable of miraculous inventions and earning a lot more money than others.Submitted by muhammad.manzoor89 on
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