In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Employees are authorized to take
time
off under labour law. In some countries, two
weeks of paid vacations are given to workers while others give four
to six
weeks paid time
off. I think two
weeks of paid vacations are enough from both employee & employer’s perspective.
Firstly
, Annual vacations that employees get, are in addition
to national & public holidays. On average, combining all national & public holidays totals to about four
weeks of days off from work
. Adding additional two
weeks of annual leaves, these go up to six
weeks each year. These days off from work
are enough to fulfil employee’s needs
.
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the employee’s needs
Secondly
, Employer
pays salary to employee for days off. Suggestion
the Employer
Employer
pays not only for these Suggestion
The employer
two
weeks but
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weeks, but
also
four
weeks of statutory holidays without getting any work
in return. This
burden of wages without any contribution is enough for employer
. Some countries do give leaves Suggestion
employers
the employer
an employer
of
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about
four
or six
weeks, it further
increases burden
of wages on employer and Suggestion
the burden
thus
lowers profitability.
In some countries, workers are given four
to six
weeks of paid vacation time
. They believe that more time
off from work
will help employee
relax from day to day routine. It will help him Suggestion
employees
the employee
in
increasing Suggestion
with
efficiency but
I disagree. According to one research, too much Accept comma addition
efficiency, but
time
away from job makes a person looses
his/her focus and results in list fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
loses
complecency
the feeling you have when you are satisfied with yourself
complacency
in
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at
work
and thus
less efficiency.
In today’s fast paced world, time
is money. Taking four
or six
weeks away from job affects not only company’s profitability but
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profitability, but
economy
as a whole.
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the economy
Last
year, I went on vacation to Thailand for twelve days. I was able to complete my wish list in just seven days. I tried to relax for remaining days but
I got bored on Accept comma addition
days, but
10th day
.
In my opinion as well as from my experience, I think Suggestion
the 10th day
two
weeks are enough vacation time
. This
not only keeps employee’s focus intact but
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intact, but
also
helps employer
to maintain profitability. Higher profits Suggestion
the employer
means
higher taxes, and Suggestion
mean
thus
whole economy
becomes Suggestion
the whole economy
beneficiary
.Suggestion
the beneficiary
a beneficiary
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