The ownership of car should be restricted to one per family in order to reduce traffic congestion and pollution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Due to
problem
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the problem
problems
of traffic congestion and
environment
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environmental
pollution, there should be one
car
for each house, I completely agree with
this
. These days due to easily available finance option with relaxed criteria thorough banks as well as
installment
a payment of part of a debt; usually paid at regular intervals
instalment
plans offered by
car
dealerships have enabled households to buy multiple vehicles.
However
, because infrastructure & road network has limited capacity and
this
has increased number of problems. Traffic congestion is a
problem
faced by almost every person driving an automobile. Due to
number
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the number
of vehicles available in each family, every person of the family moves around in their own
car
even if they are
to go
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going
to
same place
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the same place
. We notice that
number
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a number
of vehicles are moving around with just single passenger. As road network has a limited capacity,
this
increases traffic on
road
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the road
. Routes are being choked during
rush hours
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the rush hours
of mornings & evenings when people are travelling to & fro from their workplaces respectively. Another
problem
is
environment
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environmental
pollution. With each
car
, there is more use of fuel &
thus
more
combustion which
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combustion, which
in
turns
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turn
results in increased emission of dangerous gases in
environment
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the environment
. Notable gases among those are carbon monoxide (CO) which is very dangerous. These gases contaminate the air humans breathe in and
thus
this
results in not just
environment
pollution but
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pollution, but
deteriorated health of living beings as well. Example of
this
problems
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problem
comes from my own family. I, my brother & my father, all three of us have our own vehicles. Despite the fact that my brother & I work in a same lane with
distance
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a distance
of only 200 meters between our offices, we both use our own vehicles and go to work separately. I would conclude
this
essay that the best way to overcome
this
problem
is through restrictions of owning one vehicle for each household.
Carpooling
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Cabling
is very common these days where people going to same place share vehicle. They can do so
instead
of travelling in individual
cars saving
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cars, saving
both time & fuel.
Besides
carpooling
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car pooling
, people can use public transport, it will not only help financially troubled public transport
sector but
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sector, but
will
also
create a competition which in turn will improve
quality
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the quality
of these vehicles as well.
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