Some young people believe it’s best to move out of their hometowns when they become adults, while others wish to live in their hometowns their whole lives. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is argued by some that it is more

advantegeous

giving an advantage

advantageous

to relocate from their hometowns to the big cities when they grow older to have a better career, whilst others believe, it it more beneficial to stay and raise their children in their hometown. I tend to agree with the

first

statement to a certain extent. On the one hand, people chose to move from their small towns to explore life and have various occupation choices in the big cities.

In other words

, some

individuals

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individual

study and get

higher degree

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a higher degree

, in order to achieve their goals in life that includes having a successful career path.

Therefore

, they move to bigger towns where they have better and wider job positions.

For instance

, a civil

enginner

a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems

engineer

engine

will certainly find more challenging positions in the infrastructure sector in a busy city

comparing

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comparable

to a small hometown.

On the other hand

, some local people argue that living and raising their families in their own hometown will lead to a better lifestyle in the future. To state

this

in other terms, people believe that teaching both values and traditions of their families to their children is more satisfying and rewarding.

For example

, families from small towns tend to prefer raising children near their grand fathers and grand mothers

,

Accept space

,

which will make a family closer to each others. In my opinion, I believe that finding a balance between having a

successfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

career and

rasing

increasing in quantity or value

raising

a close family is a necessity.

Hence

, people should always go back to their hometowns

with

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to

their children to teach them the values they admire.

Moreover

, children will know the importance of being close to your family if they learn about their roots. In conclusion, while people decide to leave their

towns

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town

for a more desirable life, and others decide to stay for family purposes, I think that with the right balance of the two worlds a person can be happier and more satisfied.