During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter Remind him when and where you met Tell him what kind of job you are interested in Say why you think you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Smith,

This

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is Noor. We have met on

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Sunday

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the flight from Dubai to India (A477)

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P.M. We sat

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to each other and had a worthful talk for the entire three hours of our travel. I hope you remember me. And I would like to remind

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you have asked me to contact you regarding the job vacancy in your newly inaugurated Japanese

restaurant

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in India. Basically, I have fifteen years of experience as a Manager in

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Chinese cuisine in Russia. Basically, my role is to manage workers, business, hotel tariffs and auditing. Currently, I am looking for a better opportunity in India for the same role and

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I met you. As you told me that you have started hiring management people for your recently opened Chinese

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, I would like to place my profile attached with

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letter to your attention for the Manager job. I have basic knowledge and experience about Japanese food taste ,preparation and serving during my hotel management study days. Personally, I think that I can do better in the manager role, supervising the progress of the

restaurant

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, it is beneficial for me that the

restaurant

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is located in my home nation, So I would not be in need of much vacation and can concentrate more

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my work and productivity. Kindly consider my profile and let me know your decision.

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faithfully, Noor

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

237 words

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