eating too much sugar is harmful for our health.some people think that it is government responsibility ti limit people's sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. discuss both views and give your opinion

The decreasing of people's health due to the increased consumption of

sugar

,

Accept space

,

among other causes

,

Accept space

,

is a major concern these days. According to a section of people, the limitation of the amount of sweets

intaken

Suggestion

in taken

by adults and children should be limited by the government.

However

, others believe

that is

more a personal choice and people should be made aware of the risks implied by the consumption of

sugar

than to impose them to eat less sugary products. I agree that the quantity of

sugar

eaten by one is a personal decision

,

Accept space

,

regardless what the government states. On the one hand,

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the taxes on sugary products can be a method to try to limit the ingestion of

sugar

. By doing

this

,

Accept space

,

people would buy less treats with the same amount of

money

Suggestion

money, hence

hence

, they will eat less

sugar

.Recent studies showed that, in the countries where the price of fast-food was risen, the quantity of junk food

decrease

Suggestion

decreases

significantly.

On the other hand

,

Accept space

,

choosing how much sweets one buys and eats is a private option

,

Accept space

,

regardless the price.

Moreover

,

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the price would affect only a small part of the population.

Instead

, the government could promote a healthy

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

, offer

subsiditions

to gyms to encourage people to exercise more.

Accordingly to

Accept comma addition

Accordingly, to

researches of the

british

of or relating to or characteristic of Great Britain or its people or culture

British

science people

,

Accept space

,

advertising the danger of too much

sugar

on

Suggestion

to

for

humans

Suggestion

human

health during the past few years slightly decreased the sales of sweets. Overall

,

Accept space

,

I believe it would be more efficient to find alternative methods to make people aware

by

Suggestion

of

the health issues caused by too much

sugar

on a daily basis than to tell them how much

sugar

to eat.