Sometimes people think that young people should be encouraged to leave their family at certain age, while others think that it’s better for them to remain with their families. What is your view?

There are some differences between the way of Asian and Caucasian parents raise their children. In Western culture, young people aged 18 or 21 have to move out from their parents’ home to start their own life.

In contrast

, Asian parents do not want their children, especially their sons, to leave the existing family even if they have already got married. Some people agree with Western

parents

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parents'

way of upbringing children while others support the Asian parenting style. In

this

essay, I shall provide both point of views and give my personal opinion on why I believe young people should be encouraged to leave their family at

certain age

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certain ages

a certain age

. On one hand, living with parents can make

young adult

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young, adult

feel safe, loved, and cared. Parents can easily monitor their beloved children and keep them away from potential threats,

for example

, drug

abuse, excessive of

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abuse, excessive

alcohol consumption, unprotected sex, and so on. Living apart from their parents can

also

lead to depression for several months in the beginning.

On the other hand

, it is widely known that young people who live apart with their parents are more independent and mature. They are better at self-control, decision making, and money management.

For example

, study abroad makes students realise that they have to manage their money well due to the currency difference. They

also

have to adapt

with

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to

their new environment and get to know their new friends. These conditions train them to improve their self-control and decision making skills which are necessary for them to be able to have good relations with other people. In conclusion, I believe that young people who live apart from their existing families are more independent and mature. These personal characteristics are necessary for them to start a new family when they are married.

Although

there are some potential threats,

such

as being trapped in

wrong circles

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the wrong circles

, I am certain the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. Parents still can routinely communicate with their

children though

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children, though

they live apart so that they are

feel

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feeling

loved and cared while becoming more independent at the same time.