Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Olympic games

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The Olympic games

has played

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have played

its vital role in its own way in recent times, even in today's century where the problems between two countries has increased the

olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

games makes the several countries to come at one place and play for the

country

. In

this

gobal

involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

global

era, where the technology and usage of gadget has increased

upto

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up to

an extreme level so,

firslty

before anything else

firstly

it helps us to gather our family members to go out and watch the sports and spend time with each other as because people

now a days

the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

nowadays

do not have any time to sit and talk with each other as they are mainly busy in their own work because of their tight schedule.

Secondly

, due to

olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

games the communication between the countries

increases which

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increases, which

leads to less intake of war. While watching

sports children

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sports, children

can

increases

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increase

their knowledge about the new sports, about the equipments used in that sport and

also

be able to find new things about the player's playing and their countries.

Likewise

, it benefits most to the

country

in which the

olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

games

is being played

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are being played

after every four years.It helps to increase the financial status of the economy

country

.Since, it helps

host

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the host country's economy

host country's economy

country

economy by tourism of players and tourists. In

counclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

consolation

, I tend to believe that,

olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

games can provide all the things which

can not

cannot

be seen neither in any gadget nor through technology and

also

olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

is a perfect place to interact socially with people from their hectic schedules, as a

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result no

body can say no to

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capable of arousing and holding the attention

fascinating

games.

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