Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Olympic games

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The Olympic games

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its vital role in its own way in recent times, even in today's century where the problems between two countries has increased the

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olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

Olympic

games makes the several countries to come at one place and play for the

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involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope

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it helps us to gather our family members to go out and watch the sports and spend time with each other as because people

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the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech

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do not have any time to sit and talk with each other as they are mainly busy in their own work because of their tight schedule.

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olympic

of or relating to the Olympic Games

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games the communication between the countries

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leads to less intake of war. While watching

sports children

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sports, children

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increase

their knowledge about the new sports, about the equipments used in that sport and

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be able to find new things about the player's playing and their countries.

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of or relating to the Olympic Games

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games

is being played

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are being played

after every four years.It helps to increase the financial status of the economy

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.Since, it helps

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the host country's economy

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economy by tourism of players and tourists. In

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a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

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, I tend to believe that,

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of or relating to the Olympic Games

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games can provide all the things which

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of or relating to the Olympic Games

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is a perfect place to interact socially with people from their hectic schedules, as a

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capable of arousing and holding the attention

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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