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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs. What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation?

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It is irrefutable that technology has really helped man in various ways, but the
use
 of computers as a working device is gradually taking the place of humans in most occupations which will eventually give rise to unemployment in the society.
This
 essay seeks to discuss some line of work which can be replaced by computers and the downsides of
this
 replacement. Human activities are gradually fading out in most
maunfacturing
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
 and processing companies. Most of these companies now require the
use
 of computers in activities which involves processing, filling and sealing of a particular product.
Secondly
, mechanized farming is being practiced by a number of
famers
a person who operates a farm
farmers
, thereby reducing human involvement in the agricultural sector.
Thirdly
, in medicine today, the
use
 of heart pacers to monitor a
patient
Suggestion
patient's
 heartbeat and the
use
 of robotics to perform major surgeries is gradually replacing the work of the medical practitioners.
Finally
, in the area of banking, availability of cash machines and E-banking has reduced traffic in the banks and employment of more staff is in turn being discouraged.
However
, there will be increased unemployment in the society as computers will now substitute humans in many job sectors.
Consequently
, leading to low standard of living.
Also
, some people may engage in criminal activities to make ends meet. As there are no income and means of livelihood,
crime rate
Suggestion
the crime rate
 will be
at
Suggestion
on
 an increase. In conclusion, relevant occupations are gradually being taken over by technology,
subsequently
 individuals will be faced with
lack
Suggestion
a lack
 of job opportunities and may
finally
 succumb to criminal acts which
possess
introduce
poses
 a threat to the society.
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