IMPROVEMENTS IN HEALTH, EDUCATION AND TRADE ARE ESSENTIAL FOR THE DEVELOPMENT OF POORER NATIONS. HOWEVER, THE GOVERNMENTS OF RICHER NATIONS SHOULD TAKE MORE RESPONSABILITY FOR HELPING THE POORER NATIONS IN SUCH AREAS.

It is argued that, development in education and trade are crucial for the evolution of poor states.

However

, the authorities of richer nations should take more control to provide the basic need in

such

areas.

This

essay agrees with the latter view,

then

will discuss how richer countries can provide help to poor nations and

then

talk about the reasons why some improvements are essential in that

areas

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area

. The primary reason, is that education, health and trade are considered the major resources to develop a

country

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country's

economy, while it is evident, that across the improvements in that

fields

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field

, every country might be

enhance

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enhanced

.

Moreover

, the society and government can collaborate together to improve the system. To illustrate, a recent study by Queen's University found that the legislation of 5 European countries has improved their system in diverse fields thanks to the help of advance technology and the contribution of citizens. The

second

major reason, is related to the countries that are facing critical situations.

In other words

, at the present time, still there are some nations

where by

By or through which

whereby

lack of government support cannot grow economically and financially. To tackle

this

issue, the richer nations started to

provide

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Provide

education and medical treatment beyond extra charges.

In addition

, government should

sponser

assume sponsorship of

sponsor

some awareness campaigns to extend better medical treatments with

finance

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financial

support.

For example

, recently a survey by USA academy carried out that the Manager of poor countries helped some area of South Africa that are in

critical situation

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critical situations

a critical situation

, and it was noticed that the poverty of South America reached a peak from

last

2 years. In conclusion, after having discussed pertinent points,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that a good collaboration with other nations is considered a viable solution to promote the

countries

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country

country's

name.