The Three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The Three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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apprises
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us about the variation in
expenditure
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the expenditure
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of a school in England, in five different heads over three specific years i.e. 1981, 1991 and 2001, each being ten
yearly
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apart. We can figure out that most of the spending has been done in lieu of
teacher’s
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teachers’
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wages
through out
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throughout
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these years
while
least
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expenditure remained in insurance. In 1981, the teacher’s pays constituted 40% of the total expense which raised to 50% in 1991 before levelling off to 45% in 2001.
Similarly
, the resources in the form of books
also
follow
a
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same pattern being 15% in 1981, hiking to 20% in 1991 and
finally
dropped
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to 9% with a decline of almost
one half
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. The cost
on
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other
workers
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workers'
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wages remained
the
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apply
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second
in line, which was steadily reduced over a period of time, being 28% in 1981, decreasing to 22% in 1991 and with a
further
decline to 15% in 2001. In contrary, expenditure on furniture and other amenities had a major cut from 15% in 1981 to one
third
i.e. 5% in 1991, followed by
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increment to 23% in 2001.
The insurance
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Insurance
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raised gradually from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991, followed by a fourfold boost in 2001. To summarize,
overall
maximum spending was done on
teacher’s
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teachers’
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salaries,
whereas
the spending on other heads remained
fluctuating
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except
Insurance
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for Insurance
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, which steadily increased over a period of time.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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