The Three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991 and 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The given graphical data
apprises
us about the variation in Change the verb form
apprise
expenditure
of a school in England, in five different heads over three specific years i.e. 1981, 1991 and 2001, each being ten Add an article
the expenditure
yearly
apart.
We can figure out that most of the spending has been done in lieu of Replace the word
years
teacher’s
wages Fix the agreement mistake
teachers’
through out
these years Correct your spelling
throughout
while
least
expenditure remained in insurance.
In 1981, the teacher’s pays constituted 40% of the total expense which raised to 50% in 1991 before levelling off to 45% in 2001. Correct article usage
the least
Similarly
, the resources in the form of books also
follow a
same pattern being 15% in 1981, hiking to 20% in 1991 and Correct article usage
the
finally
dropped
to 9% with a decline of almost Wrong verb form
dropping
one half
.
The cost Add a hyphen
one-half
on
other Change preposition
of
workers
wages remained Change noun form
workers'
worker's
the
Correct article usage
apply
second
in line, which was steadily reduced over a period of time, being 28% in 1981, decreasing to 22% in 1991 and with a further
decline to 15% in 2001. In contrary, expenditure on furniture and other amenities had a major cut from 15% in 1981 to one third
i.e. 5% in 1991, followed by drastic
increment to 23% in 2001.
Correct article usage
a drastic
The insurance
raised gradually from 2% in 1981 to 3% in 1991, followed by a fourfold boost in 2001.
To summarize, Correct article usage
Insurance
overall
maximum spending was done on teacher’s
salaries, Fix the agreement mistake
teachers’
whereas
the spending on other heads remained fluctuating
except Change the verb form
to fluctuate
Insurance
, which steadily increased over a period of time.Change preposition
for Insurance
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