Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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T
is true that foreign movies are widely famous around the world because of popularity of movies local
film
industry
suffers.
however
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However
, I agree that government should provide financial incentives
to
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for
local movies. There are various
reason
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reasons
for foreign movies are
favourite
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a favourite
among the people.
Firstly
,
movies making
Accept comma addition
movies, making
involve big budget because it
include
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includes
cost
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the cost
of food, staff salary, products etc.
Moreover
,
movies
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movie
movie's
directors use
advance
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advanced
technology
such
as high quality cameras, softwares to improve the effects and storyline of
films
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the films
.
Secondly
, artists who play role in movies are quite experienced and talented, while directors and content writers use
wide range
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a wide range
of ideas and stories to make films big success.
On the other hand
, locally produced movies are low budget films and artists are less
experinced
having experience; having knowledge or skill from observation or participation
experienced
. At the same time, government support is necessary for the development of local cinema
industry
. If the local community fund the
film
industry
of its own country, we can see
rise
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a rise
the rise
in the popularity of local
film
industry
.
for
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For
example: lord of rings
movie
made in
new
used of a living language; being the current stage in its development
New
zealand
the largest island of Denmark and the site of Copenhagen
Zealand
and well known
movie
around the world,
therefore
this
movie
is
perfect example
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a perfect example
of
well funded
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the well funded movie
a well funded movie
movie
by government. The well funded
industry
will give chance to
talneted
endowed with talent or talents
talented
and passionate artist to showcase their talent in the public.
This
will as result lead to increase in employment and improve
economy
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the economy
of
country
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the country
.
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In
in conclusion, local
ind
ustr
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needs
y need financial he
lp of gover
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
governments
nement and can compete with foreign
film
industry
in the
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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