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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"

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Nowadays, the number of students who are willing to study abroad are continuously increasing. I will try to explain
pros
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the pros
 and cons of
this
 movement followed by reasonable conclusion including my own opinion.
In
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On
 one hand, Studying different
country
 opens the great opportunity to meet people from all over the world is the one of its
benefit
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benefits
.
Therefore
, individuals who graduated
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
 countries tend to have wider knowledge about what is happening in the world.
Morever
in addition
Moreover
,
graduaters
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
graduated
 from high ranked universities
such
 as Harward, MIT, New-York have higher chance to find work with considerable salary as well as the larger
possiblity
a future prospect or potential
possibility
possibilities
 of achieving the pursued
career
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careers
.
Furthermore
, students who completed their course in
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
 universities with better quality
standarts
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
 give better contribution the development of their own
country
 compared to the
graduaters
receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
 from local universities with
poor quality requirement
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the poor quality requirement
.
In
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On
 the other hand, the
reluctancy
(physics) opposition to magnetic flux (analogous to electric resistance)
reluctance
 of coming back to the mother
country
 is the one of its
drawback
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drawbacks
. Those chosen to stay tend to observe the advantages of the living in
foriegn
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a foreign country
foreign country
foreign countries
country
.
For instance
, according to the Mongolian statistics
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, just above 50 percent of Mongolians who went to study abroad are coming back to their home
country
 since the life
factors including
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factors, including
 stress free and safe environment, fair job marketing
,
Accept space
,
comfortable transportation
are
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is
 more suitable to live compared to their own hometown. To sum up,
Although
, It is hard to judge the advantage and disadvantage of current action, I personally hold true that
benefit
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a benefit
the benefit
 of
this
 trend
outweigh
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outweighs
 its disadvantage since its
further
 contribution of
country's
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the country's
 economical and social development is essential.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Global citizenship
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Cutting-edge facilities
  • Networking opportunities
  • Career advancement
  • Financial constraints
  • Acclimatization challenges
  • Support network
  • Educational disparity
  • Reverse culture shock
  • Bilingualism
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