Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country for their studies. "Do you think" the benefits of this outweighs the disadvantages?"
Nowadays, the number of students who are willing to study abroad are continuously increasing. I will try to explain
pros
and cons of Suggestion
the pros
this
movement followed by reasonable conclusion including my own opinion.
In
one hand, Studying different Suggestion
On
country
opens the great opportunity to meet people from all over the world is the one of its benefit
.Suggestion
benefits
Therefore
, individuals who graduated foriegn
countries tend to have wider knowledge about what is happening in the world. of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
Morever
, in addition
Moreover
graduaters
from high ranked universities receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
graduated
such
as Harward, MIT, New-York have higher chance to find work with considerable salary as well as the larger possiblity
of achieving the pursued a future prospect or potential
possibility
possibilities
career
. Suggestion
careers
Furthermore
, students who completed their course in foriegn
universities with better quality of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
standarts
give better contribution the development of their own a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standards
country
compared to the graduaters
from local universities with receive an academic degree upon completion of one's studies
graduates
poor quality requirement
.
Suggestion
the poor quality requirement
In
the other hand, the Suggestion
On
reluctancy
of coming back to the mother (physics) opposition to magnetic flux (analogous to electric resistance)
reluctance
country
is the one of its drawback
. Those chosen to stay tend to observe the advantages of the living in Suggestion
drawbacks
foriegn
Suggestion
a foreign country
foreign country
foreign countries
country
. For instance
, according to the Mongolian statistics center
, just above 50 percent of Mongolians who went to study abroad are coming back to their home an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
country
since the life factors including
stress free and safe environment, fair job marketingAccept comma addition
factors, including
,
comfortable transportation Accept space
,
are
more suitable to live compared to their own hometown.
To sum up, Suggestion
is
Although
, It is hard to judge the advantage and disadvantage of current action, I personally hold true that benefit
of Suggestion
a benefit
the benefit
this
trend outweigh
its disadvantage since its Suggestion
outweighs
further
contribution of country's
economical and social development is essential.Suggestion
the country's
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