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As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways. What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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When children become
grown-ups their
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grownups, their
grownups their
grownups' their
grownup's their
 social conduct varies in certain ways. The main difference is dependence on parents. As a child, we are hand held by our folks to guide us through the world. They instill values in us, which will eventually help when we grow old.
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, as little ones we are fragile and depend on our adults to take care of us. But, as we ourselves reach a stage of
maturity we
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maturity, we
 no longer require their assistance. Man is a social being and our companions enable us to get through life. During childhood, we are introduced to our peers through school, but seldom develop relations with them.
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, in adolescence we aren’t able to proceed
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 without our friends. These examples of situations in our lives differ as we progress. The example of judgment between right and wrong
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 yet another differentiator. Our feeble mind at a tender age is unable to distinguish the good from
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the bad
 while our trained minds judge people instantly. Decision-making is another criteria that develops with time. In
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society, most
 rules of speaking, dressing or interacting are limited to the older generation.
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, growth is part of life and eventually one has to reach that stage. Change is inevitable and more often than not brings about the good in an individual.
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, the development of speech as a baby
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 a teen is required. The fact that independence is given rather than having to completely depend on anyone.
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, to
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conclude, we
 are part of a culture that demands growth in every aspect of life.
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