Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
According to some
gender
based teaching institutions provides better education while others contradict and vehemently supports the argument that co-education is the secret to achieve Use synonyms
highest
learning standards.
On the one hand, many of our social and cultural valves are based on religion, Suggestion
higher
infact
our way of leading day to day life is the reflection of our religious obligations. In many religions of the world like Islam it is forbidden for males and females to get mix-up, especially after attaining the age of puberty and it is considered that Suggestion
in fact
such
mixed gatherings give rise to many Linking Words
otherwise
avoidable social evils, Linking Words
therefore
they oppose the very idea of co-education and stress on separate schools and colleges for both genders.
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Secondly
, for few orthodox Linking Words
societies it
is hard to believe that girls can compete boys in studies or for that matter in any aspect of life, Accept comma addition
societies, it
therefore
they prefer sending their girls in Linking Words
gender
biased teaching facilities so that they may not find difficulty in learning.
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On the other hand
, the modernized world believes that mixed colleges and universities bring confidence to the female Linking Words
gender
by virtue of which they are not only able to represent themselves worldwide but are Use synonyms
exceling
in different fields at the same time. Many studies conducted globally probing distinguish oneself
excelling
this
social issue infers that comparatively, those ladies who studies in combined institutes are more confident in their Linking Words
jobs even
rising to managerial positions than others who had never Accept comma addition
jobs, even
have
an experience of contemporising opposite Suggestion
had
gender
.
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Besides
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this
the mixed education creates awareness and respect for the female Linking Words
gender
, which has far reaching effects in bringing social harmony in the society, Use synonyms
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moreover in
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moreover, in
this
world of falling economy, it is very difficult rather a financial burden to construct separate institutions for ladies and gents when it is possible to send them in the same institute with much less finances involved.
To conclude, Linking Words
sharing teaching
institutes have both pros and Accept comma addition
sharing, teaching
cons but
in my opinion the benefits of co-education Accept comma addition
cons, but
outweighs
its Suggestion
outweigh
negatives especially
in the face of new Accept comma addition
negatives, especially
economical
limitations especially in developing countries.Suggestion
economic
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