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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference Write letter to a former teacher . Give deatils of the job explain why it is important to you suggest what information your teacher could put in the refernece

#job #reference #teacher #deatils #information #refernece
Dear Mrs. Pattinson, I, Jane Morgan graduated in year 2010, as a Microbiologist would like to put
request
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the request
a request
 of reference letter for applying
job
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a job
 in forensic laboratory. Please note I am going to apply for the Junior Microbiologist post at “National Forensic Science” and as per norms reference letter is to be submitted during application. The job
require
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requires
 person with special skill of
finger print
a print made by an impression of the ridges in the skin of a finger; often used for biometric identification in criminal investigations
fingerprint
 analysis using manual as well as using
latest machine technique
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the latest machine technique
latest machine techniques
.
Other
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Another
 key area of responsibilities includes collecting,
analyzing
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analysing
 and maintaining data of sampling collected during
onsite crime scene
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an on-site crime scene
on-site crime scene
. During
last
 semester, I had taken additional credit course of
finger print
a print made by an impression of the ridges in the skin of a finger; often used for biometric identification in criminal investigations
fingerprint
 analysis using DNA technique which will provide
necessary experience
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the necessary experience
necessary experiences
 require to achieve
position
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a position
 as a Microbiologist. You are requested to include information
such
 as, level of expertise I have gained for
identification DNA
Accept comma addition
identification, DNA
finger printing
the procedure of taking inked impressions of a person's fingerprints for the purpose of identification
fingerprinting
 during
course
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the course
also
 research work which I had completed under your guidance for usage of Biological agent for reduction in environmental pollution.
This
 is will surely help me to land the job. Thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, Jane Morgan
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