In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Companies, nowadays, prefer employees with more relevant work experience than with higher

educational

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education

certificates. Many people believe that in future academic qualifications are not necessary. I completely disagree

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with

this

notion, and

this

essay discusses some points to support my view. More and more students are now opting technical

education

in colleges and universities to get good theoretical

knowledge

in their field. It always helps them to advance in their career to higher positions, through promotions. Even though,

having competitive practical

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have competitive practical knowledge boosted

will competitive practical knowledge boost

has competitive practical knowledge boosted

having competitive practical knowledge boost

knowledge

boost the chances of getting job

initially

, promotions and career progressions always depend on a person's educational qualification.

For example

, during appraisals, companies assign higher management posts to staffs with post-graduation degrees or PhD.

Moreover

, top hierarchical positions always require good

text-book

according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical

textbook

knowledge

along with practical skills to make quick decisions having

wide impact

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a wide impact

over an organization. Some companies follow the strategy of employing workers with expertise in real life situation. But while selecting

such

skilled labours there will be some criteria for an educational background

also

, as practical experience without a theoretical

knowledge

will not make a person adept

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what he or she is doing.

For example

, some states in India which are very behind in

education sector

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the education sector

, have adequate number labourers, but experts are less.

This

illustrates the importance of

education

, and there is no chance that in future, job markets will hunt for applicants without formal

education

. In conclusion, formal qualifications are necessary to get lucrative jobs and companies always target for workers with good balance of theoretical as well as practical experience.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

It is often said that governments spend too much money on project to protect wildlife, while there are other problems that are more important? Do you agree or disagree?

some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people prefer to go to gym and clubs for health care but others say walking and jumping stairs are more effective. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

FOR MANY PEOPLE, THE REASON THEY WORK HARD IS TO EARN MONEY. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?