In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Companies, nowadays, prefer employees with more relevant work experience than with higher
educational
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education
certificates. Many people believe that in future academic qualifications are not necessary. I completely disagree
to
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with
this
notion, and
this
essay discusses some points to support my view. More and more students are now opting technical
education
in colleges and universities to get good theoretical
knowledge
in their field. It always helps them to advance in their career to higher positions, through promotions. Even though,
having competitive practical
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have competitive practical knowledge boosted
will competitive practical knowledge boost
has competitive practical knowledge boosted
having competitive practical knowledge boost
knowledge
boost the chances of getting job
initially
, promotions and career progressions always depend on a person's educational qualification.
For example
, during appraisals, companies assign higher management posts to staffs with post-graduation degrees or PhD.
Moreover
, top hierarchical positions always require good
text-book
according to or characteristic of a casebook or textbook; typical
textbook
knowledge
along with practical skills to make quick decisions having
wide impact
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a wide impact
over an organization. Some companies follow the strategy of employing workers with expertise in real life situation. But while selecting
such
skilled labours there will be some criteria for an educational background
also
, as practical experience without a theoretical
knowledge
will not make a person adept
in
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at
what he or she is doing.
For example
, some states in India which are very behind in
education sector
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the education sector
, have adequate number labourers, but experts are less.
This
illustrates the importance of
education
, and there is no chance that in future, job markets will hunt for applicants without formal
education
. In conclusion, formal qualifications are necessary to get lucrative jobs and companies always target for workers with good balance of theoretical as well as practical experience.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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