Science advanced so much that it can make it possible for people to live for 100 years or more than it.Some people think it is good thing, others think it is bad idea. Discuss both side of argument.

Nowadays advancement in science is becoming popular. Most of the people believe that it would make possible for

human being

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human beings

a human being

to survive more as compared to

past

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the past

, while others argue

this

.

This

essay will discuss both

side

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sides

of argument in detail and put

forward argument

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forward an argument

why there should be

limit

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limits

on human life span.

To begin

with, there are people who advocate that scientific advancement has been increasing the human's survival rate as comparing with the

pastlife

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past life

span. As it has enhanced the medical services by providing high tech equipment

such

as X-Ray machines,

sonographs

, and ECG.

This

helps in making the humans more healthier because diseases are recognised easily and

precurred

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

before it becomes

vulnarable

susceptible to attack

vulnerable

for the life of

person

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a person

the person

people

. A recent studies,

for example

, revealed that the percentage of

death rate

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the death rate

is

declined

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declining

as compared to the 19th

centuary's

a period of 100 years

century

data.

Thus

, medical facilities is increasing the chance of life span on earth.

On the contrary

, some people hold the opinion that

ther

in or at that place

there

their

the

should be some restriction on the

person

's age because

this

will put

financial burden

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a financial burden

on the government.If the

person

start

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starts

living more than average

age

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age, then

then

government have to spend more on their pension and health.

For instance

, all around the world,

person

will become eligible for pension after attaining age of 60 and can redeem it until he dies.

This

could

also

create

economic crisis

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an economic crisis

.

Therefore

, it is becoming necessary that science should not interfere with the natural death created by

almigty

having unlimited power

almighty

. To conclude, advancement in the technology is raising the chance of

survival which

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survival, which

is

unextable

not adequate to give satisfaction

unacceptable

by most of the people and some find it beneficial.

This

essay has discussed the both

side

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sides

of views and

expained

make plain and comprehensible

explained

expand

why

this

will become crucial for economy of

country

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the country

.