Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara Desert or Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Over the
last
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decades globalization
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decades, globalization
has increased. People are opting for
adventure
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travelling rather relaxing. There are both pros and cons of
adventure
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travelling, we will discuss both in details.
Adventure
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holidays
has taken
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have taken
place of relaxing outing. Nowadays people are choosing
adventure
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travelling like mountain trekking, desert safari, river rafting, travelling to
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
and so on. Risk travelling not only enhance
confidence
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the confidence
of the
person but
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person, but
also
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provide courage to stay aloof. It
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also help
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also helps
has also helped
to survive with minimum resources and enrich persona of discipline. Thrilling experience attracts all ages from young youth to old people. It
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enhances
economic status
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the economic status
of that town. It provides necessary employment to locals when
town
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the town
a town
become
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becomes
tourist attraction
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a tourist attraction
. Trekking on a difficult mountain
enrich
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enriches
feeling of exhilaration. When one
reach
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reaches
has reached
the top of the mountain where no other person has yet reached gives
feeling
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a feeling
of pride to trekker along with his nation. The curiosity of exploring unknown places
encourage
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encourages
people to travel
such
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danger
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dangerous
places.
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curiosity allowed Columbus to discover unknown islands. To achieve difficult task is enthralling feeling which can only be
experience
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experienced
.
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, there are cons of the difficult travelling.
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trip may not go as planned. There are many mountaineers who had died during high peaks due to lack of oxygen.
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Also some
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Also, some
adventurer
have survived
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has survived
unrecoverable accidents were left bedridden. If someone
go
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goes
missing during trips than state might have to initiate
expensive search
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an expensive search
for
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to
look out of
such
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traveler
a person who changes location
travellers
.
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there are positive as well as negative of
adventure
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travelling. But still curious human will continue to explore and conquer the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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