ompleting university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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it is a common sight to get

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degree is the best key

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to

having a good

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while others believe that

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experience

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and improving skills are more important than

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education. In my opinion, having

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of them is

essential but

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essential, but

for answering

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question that each of them is more important I think it depends on your career in the future

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or business). In

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essay, I will look at

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sides and try to draw some conclusions. -

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start by looking at the advantages of

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education. For some majors like medicine

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law or

teaching it’s

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teaching, it’s

impossible to get a

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without educational background.

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,

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milieu is a good place for burgeoning

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student's

students'

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aptitude, provided that, learning wasn’t by rote. In fact, alumni under the aegis of

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the university

universities

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aspirant

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aspired

to

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careers

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the future

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, these days, most of the

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has

vocational courses during the term

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so pupils can follow them and improve their knowledge. - Turning to the other side, having

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experience

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and soft skills is a great way for students that ameliorate their ability.

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, in many

industries

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industry

employers will only hire people who previous

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experience

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because by

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way they can eliminate the costs involved in training new employees. - In conclusion, getting a lucrative

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requires

both

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university

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education and

work

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experience

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because

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of them complement each other. In fact, no one can get a good

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without effort and an iron will. Personally, I think, at

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we should know about our position in future because

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of

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business, we

need more

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than academic study

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also

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experience

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alone is not enough.