The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last 20 years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion,

It is considered by some that

involvement

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the involvement

of married women in work has created

problem

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the problem

a problem

problems

of juvenile delinquency. But I totally disagree with

this

view. On one hand, nurturing is not

only task

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the only task

of women. As, both parents are equally responsible for

this

. While

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

get engaged in

work

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the work

they could ease

financial burden

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the financial burden

of

family

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the family

families

as well.As a consequence, their offsprings shouldn't have to worry about

financial crisis

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the financial crisis

and be more concentrated towards their study. One of the main

reason

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reasons

for the juvenile delinquency might be the broken family. Since, it negatively impact

in

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on

child development as well.

In addition

to it, they

lack

proper supervision

from

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of

their parents.

Secondly

,

lack

of moral behaviour among children has

increase

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increased

this

problem

.

For instance

: In a society where honesty is highly valued.

In contrast

to it, truancy can be considered as

major step

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a major step

for the emergence of

this

problem

.

Eventhough

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Even though

, youths are aware about

this

major

consequences

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consequence

.

However

, they

are often seem

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often seem

to be

neglect

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neglected

towards their

study which

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study, which

hamper in their career as well.

Furthermore

,

lack

of communication between parents

are

introduces an alternative

or

children are another hindrance to

this

problem

. Youths feel more comfortable to spend

there

of them or themselves

their

times

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time

with friends rather than with their parents. Not only

this

, parents

also

do not make

effort

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an effort

the effort

to interact with their children. If teenager

lack

proper

guidance

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guidance, then

then

they might get victim of

such

problems. In my view,

mother

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the mother

alone cannot be only blamed for

this

problem

. Apart, from

this

ethics

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ethic

taught by parents play a crucial role in tackling with

such

type of

problem

.

For example

: In past

days

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days we also

also

we had heard

such

type of news.

In conclusion both

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In conclusion, both

parents should prepare youth to become self-reliant so that they could cope with any kind of hurdles.