Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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I agree, with the statement, to increase the price of the fuel, will impact
vehicle
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conjuction
excessive accumulation of blood or other fluid in a body part
congestion
conduction
and reduce the
environment
Suggestion
environmental
hazards. Apart from the mentioned, there are few more precautions need to be taken, which we will discuss in the latter part. Coming to the impacted areas, to reduce the traffic by the government, are as follows.
Firstly
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,
rise
Suggestion
the rise
in the petrol rates, will not only
effect
have an effect upon
affect
the
vehicle
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purchase, but
also
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existing automobiles too.
For example
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, if there is
increase
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an increase
in the fuel rate,
then
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expenditure rises, which in turn impact on the usage of the
vehicle
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.
Secondly
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, Imposing taxes on the vehicles, that are going to consume more power.
For instance
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, if the government is going to high the amount for the own
vechile
a conveyance that transports people or objects
vehicle
,
then
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the number of customers will be less.
Third
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, making
availability
Suggestion
the availability
of the public transportation, at frequent interval and to remote areas. For a sample, More number of Busses and trains are available to the consumers at
peek
the most extreme possible amount or value
peak
time,
then
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the changes of using private transport will reduce considerably. Considering the measures that need to be taken by General public, will be discussed here.
Initially
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, They need to go for public transportation, in order to reduce the problems, that contributes the cause.
For example
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,
Instead
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of using their
vehicle
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, if they go in
tube
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the tube
a tube
,
then
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we can reduce the source of the problem.
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, Go green is one of the important solution that reduces the cause. Just in case, Plantation of more trees, will observe the carbon monoxide that
observe
Suggestion
observes
the harmful gases that are
output
Suggestion
the output
outputs
of our vehicles. In conclusion,
its
it is
it's
the responsibility of each and
everyone
Suggestion
every one
of us to contribute to the elimination of the cause. For better Society, we need to build
better environment
Suggestion
a better environment
better environments
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Discourage
  • Incentivize
  • Alternative energy
  • Public transportation
  • Lower-income
  • Carpool
  • Ride-sharing
  • Congestion
  • Urban planning
  • Pedestrian-friendly
  • Tax incentives
  • Electric and hybrid vehicles
  • Emissions standards
  • Cleaner vehicles
  • Congestion charges
  • Bicycle lanes
  • Sustainable
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