Today, more and more tourusts are visiting where conditions are different, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Over a decade, people are visiting various places, like

Sahara

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the Sahara

and Antarctic areas. There are various advantages as well as disadvantages, which will be discussed in the latter part. Coming to the advantages of the visit.

First

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, we will learn about the historic significance of the area.

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, each and every

place

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, will have

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

own significance and may be useful for most of us.

Second

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, Culture of that

place

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, will let us know about the their ancestors.

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positives

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the positives

of the civilization of that area, may not only help us to improve our lifestyle at present, but in

future

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the future

too.

Third

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, information of the

livelyhood

the financial means whereby one lives

livelihood

of the citizens, that are residing will be different according to the climatic conditions. For a sample, The lifestyle of the people, those who live in

extrem

of the greatest possible degree or extent or intensity

extreme

hot climate, will be different from those from too cold. Regarding the disadvantages.

Intially

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Initially

, Those who are travelling to

new

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new places

a new place

place

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with huge variation in temperature, tend to have medical disorders. Just in case, In my personal experience, when

refers to the speaker or writer

travelled to the

place

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, where temperature are less than 10

degree

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degrees

, made me

caught

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catch

with cold and fever, which

last

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for

couple

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a couple

week

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weeks

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, Language barrier, impact the one, if proper precautions are not taken.

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, if we go to

new country

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a new country

the new country

, the chances of getting lost will be more, due to lack of

appropiate

suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc

appropriate

communication channel. In conclusion, It's

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positive sigh to visit new places, when

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suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc

appropriate

precautions are taken. Tourism should information along with entertainment, but should not be messy.

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