There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, which encourages them to buy goods such as toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisers claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable to say that world is full of
advertisement
which gives impacts on the Suggestion
advertisements
childerns
. There are spilt opionions
regarding to effects of a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinions
advertisement
on childern
. Some people believe that children a young person of either sex
children
are feel
so much pressure to buy goods Suggestion
are feeling
have felt
feel
such
as toys and snacks because of increasing in advertisement
. Whereas, another group of thinkers Suggestion
the advertisement
support
that Suggestion
supports
advertisement
provide some knowledgable
and highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
usefull
information to children. being of use or service
useful
Therefore
, before commmenting
on my views, both the opinions would be discussed.
Advertisements are the strategy to get the attention of the people and increase a statement that expresses a personal opinion or belief or adds information
commenting
there
popularity and sales. of them or themselves
their
which
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Which
also
effects to the children as well. Many parents are worried because of advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
infulence
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
chidlren
in a young person of either sex
children
negative way
. The Suggestion
a negative way
negative ways
advertisement
shows some clostly
toys and unhealthy food entailing great loss or sacrifice
costly
such
as snacks which intimate to
children to Suggestion
with
buys
these type of goods. But parents are denying to buy them for children. Suggestion
buy
Moreover
, children feel so much angry and high tension in their mind. Example lays and unclechips
are not healthy for the children. But children are attrattive
to snacks and they do fight with their parents to complete their demands.
On the hand Suggestion
attracted
attractive
attentive
iterative
advertisement
people believe that they are providing some useful knowledge to the children. Firstly
, Some toys have so much technology which
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technology, which
teach
about how to use in the future. Suggestion
teaches
Such
as racing car, it teach
to Suggestion
teaches
chidlren
that how the car run and drive. a young person of either sex
children
Secondly
, Some goods increase there
ability of of them or themselves
their
leaarning
and problem the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
such
as rubicube
advertisement
.
To conclude, I would like say
that there are so many effects of Suggestion
to say
advertisement
over the children. So, parents needs
to guide them and teach Suggestion
need
them which
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them, which
advertisement
are good. The government has to take steps from there side.Submitted by iN on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite