Film stars and music celebrities may earn a great deal of money and live in luxurious surroundings, but many of them lead unhappy lives. Do you agree? To what extent is this the price they pay for being famous?

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It is well known that famous people,
such
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as movie stars and pop singers earn millions of dollars every year, and have a luxurious
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
. Unfortunately, many of them are
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reported to be depressed and unhappy, and some people associate these
phsychological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
conditions with their high earnings. In my opinion, there is no association between a person's wealth and rich surrounding, with his
hapinness
state of well-being characterized by emotions ranging from contentment to intense joy
happiness
in
life
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because money, no matter what we buy, cannot change our state of mind. Being happy, and living a happy
life
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, can come when we are complete with ourselves and our decisions.
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association between happiness and earning a great deal of money has been a focus of an important research published in 2008, which evaluated the incidence of
deppression
a mental state characterized by a pessimistic sense of inadequacy and a despondent lack of activity
depression
among blue
color
a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
collar
workers and senior management in a big financial firm. The article has shown clearly that salary was not a factor in a person's mental health, and other parameters,
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as having a family and feeling safe and secure, were associated substantially more with feelings of isolation and loneliness. Despite the above mentioned, I do think that being lonely and unhappy is directly associated with being famous,
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
well known people are forced to be isolated from our society and cannot engage in a normal lifestyle. Madonna or Frank Sinatra,
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,
are
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is
unable to walk down the streets of New York and enter a grocery shop like regular people.
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, they cannot celebrate a birthday of a close friend in a bar because they will be recognized instantly.
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, these people live a parallel
life
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away
fron
a giver or sender
from
the rest of the community, and
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, in my opinion, is the main reason why so many famous people are unhappy. To conclude, I do not think that being wealthy is directly associated with mental health. Our decisions in
life
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, and our close friends are what makes us happy. Despite that, famous people are forced to be isolated from our society and
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might be the main reason for their unhappy
life
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.
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