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It is becoming increasingly popular for people to travel to tourist destinations during public holidays. What problems does this cause? What solutions are there to these problems?

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There are lots of tourist places in India. More and more people are travelling across the country. Now a days people are
also
 exploring international destinations as well. People are more crazy to visit international destinations as now banks are providing loans for tourism purpose. Most visitors are planning to visit in public holidays, one of the reason is they do not need to take much more leave from the office. Another reason is, they easily get a companion for the same plan from family or friends, due to public holidays and because of
this
, tourist places are becoming overcrowded. Sometimes when you reach the destination, you feel that you are on wrong time, even hotels and other facilities are too much costlier comparable to off season. Considering above mentioned problems, one should either plan in advance with earlier bookings of hotels and transportation or plan to explore in off season where they can not only easily get accomodation but
also
 in cheaper rate too.
Moreover
, you can reach out to the corner areas of the destination and in a peaceful environment.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overcrowding
  • increased prices
  • environmental damage
  • traffic congestion
  • safety concerns
  • cultural degradation
  • limited availability
  • waiting lines
  • tourist attractions
  • conflict
  • local residents
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