Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduatesbhave led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history and only offer practical degree coursesbthat maximises chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different perceptions towards the subjects taught in higher studies. Some propose that tertiary
education
should focus to get good job opportunities and not include art subjects while others oppose it. Personally, I strongly disagree with the former opinion. There are myriad of reasons why university teaching should not be limited to practical degree courses. Actually, tertiary
education
is allowing a person to do in-depth study about a particular subject training to become a professional. In fact, every subject has its own value and importance, it is not a good act entirely to look down on the art subjects even in the era of science and technology. The essence of higher
education
should not be affected by the current popularity of
employment trend
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the employment trend
.
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reality, the fame and success of people who finished their degrees
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art subjects should not be overlooked. Though today's world is dominated by scientists, the work of philosophers and their role is not disappearing at all as thoughts and ideas for mental wellbeing are still important in whatever era. If a person is confident and qualified, chance of getting jobs could not differ a lot among job applicants graduated degree like history and practical subject as
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a computer
computers
. To conclude, in my opinion, the core value of university
education
should not be judged against the contemporary employment pattern. I think that an effort of a person is more important to achieve a job rather than disputing over the types of qualifications and certificates.
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