People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

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People living in large cities face tremendous problems due to the over population of the area and the facilities available can't go round. So it's result to competition and trying to manage the resources available. In my own view
government
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should encourage people to live in smaller cities by providing the necessary infrastructure for
them which
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them, which
will make them not to think of going out to big cities. In big
cities there
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cities, there
is overcrowding already. If
th small
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smaller
the small
the smaller
the smallest
cities have facilities that make life more comfortable and meaningful those in big cities may come back to small cities.
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for
worker
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working
in
government
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jobs, they should be
giving
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given
extra package as a form of incentive for them to want to stay in small cities.
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Also if
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Also, if
free education and medical can't be free in
small
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smaller
cities,
government
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should
subsidized
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subsidize
them.
This
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will
also
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encourage people to stay in small
cities especially
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cities, especially
young couple who
are just starting
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is just starting
to build their family. I
government
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can do all these things, people will like to live in small cities.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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