Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

Nowadays, the processing and preservation of several foods are
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
with some
chemically
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chemical
prepared additives. In my opinion, the setbacks caused by the application of chemicals during
food
productions and elongation
such
as risk of terminal disease and early maturity cum excessive weight gain far outweighs any benefit it may have. Admittedly, the shelve life extension is one major advantage.
This
is because different table consumables
such
as
food
or
fruit raw
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fruit, raw
produce are peculiar to each part of the world or the country and so needs to be moved to different local, national or international markets.
Besides
, the taste demand of different tribes and race are different,
therefore
, various standards has to be reached.
For instance
, a tomato paste company in Nigeria once reported that the cost of additives and preservatives
for
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in
their product which is necessitated by the need to cover all customers and meet up with the
food
regulation
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regulatory
agency standard has
although
increased by 20% but the quality and the number of days it can spend on the supermarket shelve has increased. Another dividend worthy of note is the issue of
aided
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aiding
foreign exchange.
This
have been encouraged
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has been encouraged
because these processed-with-chemical foods can withstand long stay on the sea during exportation and
this
aids foreign trade and personal international business
.
Accept space
.
A common
incidence
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incident
is rice, beans, locust bean packaged and preserved with chemicals like sodium
chloride which
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chloride, which
boosts both the national and individual economy.
Nevertheless
, despite the advantages above, the high risk and incidence of terminal diseases is the
first
reason why I agree that the dangers of applying chemicals in
food
productions far outstrips the benefits. To
further
elaborate on
this
, most chemicals put in these
food
products are found to contribute to the growth of cancerous cells in consumers.
For example
Nutrition Society
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the Nutrition Society
on
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of
in
Nigeria reported that most genetically modified and chemically processed
food
have caused
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has caused
more than eighty percent of terminal diseases in Nigeria chief of which is cancer.
Secondly
, the use of the so-called chemicals in making or increasing shelve lives has caused an early maturity and excessive weight gain in many children and youths.
This
may be owing to the fact that most of those consumables are considered fast foods and has high sugar. Most of our children's delight in these sugary foods results in rapid maturity and obesity most times. In conclusion, while extended shelve life and foreign exchange aid are reasons why many sees nothing bad in the use of chemicals in the production and preservation of
food
products, I believe the disadvantages
makes
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are making
have made
are made
pale of any merit it may have.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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