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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages?

#dangers #chemicals #food #production #preservation
Food
 production and preservation is a major issue today
as a result
 of the
use
 of chemicals. In my opinion, major drawback
such
 as the
effect
 on the
health
 of consumers
outweights
be heavier than
outweighs
 some of the benefit it brings. Admittedly, one of the major
advantage
Suggestion
advantages
 of the
use
 of chemicals in
food
 production and preservation is helping to prolong
food
 shelf like and makes it readily available to consumers. Today one can walk into any store and get a readily made foods that can be consumed immediately or that requires microwaving. As
such
, time and energy need to prepare
such
food
 can be invested in doing other things.
Nevertheless
, the major drawback of the
use
 of chemical for
food
 production and preservation is the long time
effect
 it has on the consumer.
Chemicals
Suggestion
The chemicals
 used are
hash
Suggestion
hashed
 on
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 consumers and can lead to
health
 issues
such
 as
cancer among
Accept comma addition
cancer, among
 others because
this
plural of "this"
these
those
 chemicals attacked the immune system. A research published by WHO in the year 1996 concluded that foods preserved with chemicals
such
 as Benzoates and Sulphites are detrimental to the
health
 of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 consumers and will likely lead to cancer.
This
 clearly tells how great the
effect
 of the
use
 of chemicals can be. In conclusion, while parts of the advantage of using chemical include long shelf life and easy availability of
such
food
,
it
it is
it's
 major drawback which is
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
effect
 on the
health
 of
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 consumer is of great importance and should not be neglected.
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