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You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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I am Surya, I am a teacher with
the
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Master's
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Masters
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 in
Computer
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 Science and Engineering. I have recently noticed an advertisement for the requirement of a teacher at the community college. The college is located on
the
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apply
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Elcamino road 10 meters from the bus stop. I looked into college
course work
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coursework
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 and came up with courses that
interests
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interest
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 me to teach. I am willing to take up courses in the field of
computer
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 science. The course offered will be on Artificial Intelligence because of its popularity among current trends, apart from that I like to teach the basics of
Computer
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 science and Operating
System
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Systems
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. The AI is mostly about the
computer
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artifically
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artificially
artificial
 learning to search/identify objects based on the models we train. I strongly believe
,
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 I am the best fit for
this
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 position because of the qualification and the work experience in
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 field.
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, I have a Master's in Artificial Intelligence which makes me stand apart from the rest of the applicants.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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