many companies use advertisement to increase a their sale.What are the main factors that make an advertisement effective?Is advertising a good thing or bad thing for society?

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In today's
moderen
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
world of technology everyone is surrounded by
varites
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
varieties
of advertises. Product
comapnies
an institution created to conduct business
companies
are spending lots of resources in terms of time and money to make an effective advertise to boost up their product
consumpation
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
in
market
Suggestion
the market
. I firmly believe, that
this
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is
tread
Suggestion
treading
is good for society as it
give
Suggestion
gives
awarness
having knowledge of
awareness
about products and other
usefull
being of use or service
useful
information.
To begin
Linking Words
with
,
Accept space
,
there are
numerouse
Suggestion
numerous e
reasons that make an advertisement effective. To start with most of the companies higher celebrities or
sprot
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
sprout
sprat
icon to
pramot
contribute to the progress or growth of
promote
their product. As people are following
them they
Accept comma addition
them, they
will
influenece
a power to affect persons or events especially power based on prestige etc
influence
influenced
by their favourite
celeberities
a widely known person
celebrities
and by that product.
Moreover
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, companies are targeting
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
with fairy tales and super-
heros
a man distinguished by exceptional courage and nobility and strength
heroes
hero
kind of
advertise
Suggestion
advertising
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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