It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. 🔸Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.

Nowadays, it is a subject of hot debates that the

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of old people in comparison with

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younger

age groups is increasing. In

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essay, I will consider both sides of

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phenomenon and reveal why societies will need young people more than the elderly. One of the biggest drawbacks of societies containing large

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of old people would be the fact that, most of the times they suffer from illnesses. Young people should spend

big part

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a big part

of their money on solving their mental and health problems. My mother is an example who spends

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a big part

of her income to buy her father's drugs because he suffers from lung cancer. A

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downside of increasing the

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of old people in nations is that the elderly cannot be as energetic as young people.

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less activities will cause generation gaps between old and young people. The relationship between my daughter and her grandfather is an instance in which she wants to go to park with

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him, but

he is not

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healthy enough to

go out with her.

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, a substantial benefit of

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the increasing number

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of old people is that

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younger

age groups can use their experiences and learn from them how to solve their problems. My father, who was

accountant

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an accountant

in a big company, always teaches me how to manage my money to have a convenience life in my future. What is more,

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older

people are more tactful and patient than young people which make them more appropriate for important position of jobs.

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year, my president hired a 40 year-old accountant to avoid paying financial penalties and unnecessary taxes. In conclusion, in my opinion, weighing both sides of

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argument, the disadvantages that

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an increasing number

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of old people brings, is greater than its benefits.