Nowadays, there are more workers working from home and more students studying from home, due to the fact that that computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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One of the fastest growing areas of modern civilization is computerized technology and
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is having extraordinary impacts on
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work
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and school. Many individuals are working and studying from their residences
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the convenience and
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aspects of
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trend. I opine that
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phenomenon is simultaneously
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beneficial and detrimental. Those
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engage their professional and scholastic responsibilities from home enjoy several benefits. To begin, it saves
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time
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and is more convenient than having to commute to school or
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.
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do not have to expend
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time
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and energy commuting from their residence to their
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or scholastic
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and in my
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could save me several hours each day which I could devote to other activities.
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,
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will incur significant cost savings owing to the fact that they will not have to pay for transportation costs to and from their
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or school.
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, dining out is always more expensive and savings will be attained on
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front as well. I personally spend a hefty portion of my income on
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transportation and eating out during my working day.
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, working and studying from home may have some detrimental impacts as well.
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face-to-face contact and socially isolate
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.
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,
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already see each other less
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modern communication technologies and
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will only exacerbate
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growing trend.
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, the quality of
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and studies are not always as sound as working or studying in person. When
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are together in person they are usually more accountable for their
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or studies
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more sensitive to each
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needs and
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often allows for a higher quality
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working or learning. All in all, performing professional and scholastic duties from home includes benefits
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as
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and cost savings
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convenience.
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, it
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brings detriments
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as less physical and
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face to-face
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contact which may affect the quality of
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produced. I ultimately feel the benefits outweigh the drawbacks and if
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can find ways to
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the disadvantages,
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optimum outputs can be experienced from
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trend
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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