Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that,

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environment

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the environment

is a vital part

in

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of

a country.

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that, governments and every individual should take responsibility to save

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environment

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the environment

. On the one hand,

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environment

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the environment

plays an important role in human life.

but

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But

nowadays, people are destroying the

environment

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in different ways.

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For

example

,

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most of the people use different vehicles and these vehicles produce

emmissions

the act of emitting; causing to flow forth

emissions

emotions

remissions

and exhaust fumes.

so

to a very great extent or degree

So

,

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the environment

is polluted by

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this fumes

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these fumes

.

for

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For

this

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reasons green house effect is increasing.

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Also people's

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Also, people's

through their waste or rubbish in any places.

people

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People

do not think the consequences of dropping rubbish or waste.

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Also many

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Also, many

people

cutdown

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cut down

enormous areas of rainforest.

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this

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This

will cause a huge lose to our

environment

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.So

i

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I

think every

individuals

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individual

should take some steps to protect the

environment

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.

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for

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For

example, people should take public transport rather than driving.

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Also people

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Also, people

through

propel through the air

throw

garbage in the right place.

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And

help police

to arrest

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arrest

those people who are destroying the rainforest.

On the other hand

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,

government

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should take some steps to save

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environment

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the environment

.Nowadays, many developing countries are becoming

industrializede

made industrial; converted to industrialism

industrialized

.So

,

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,

the factories and industry are greatly polluted by fumes and gases.In that case,

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government

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the government

could introduce laws to limit emission from factories.

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Also they

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Also, they

could impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies.

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government

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Government

should

also

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invest money to renewable energy from solar, wind and water power, and they

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camping should promote recycling.

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In

conclusion,

environment

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is a great and significant results in our world.

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In

my opinion, it is important to protect our

environment

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.So

government

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and individual should take responsibility to protect our

environment

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.