Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should take responsibility for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that,
environment
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the environment
is a vital part
in
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of
a country.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
believe that, governments and every individual should take responsibility to save
environment
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the environment
. On the one hand,
environment
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the environment
plays an important role in human life.
but
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But
nowadays, people are destroying the
environment
in different ways.
for
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For
example
,
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,
most of the people use different vehicles and these vehicles produce
emmissions
the act of emitting; causing to flow forth
emissions
emotions
remissions
and exhaust fumes.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
,
environment
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the environment
is polluted by
this fumes
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these fumes
.
for
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For
this
reasons green house effect is increasing.
Also people's
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Also, people's
through their waste or rubbish in any places.
people
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People
do not think the consequences of dropping rubbish or waste.
Also many
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Also, many
people
cutdown
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cut down
enormous areas of rainforest.
this
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This
will cause a huge lose to our
environment
.So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think every
individuals
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individual
should take some steps to protect the
environment
.
for
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For
example, people should take public transport rather than driving.
Also people
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Also, people
through
propel through the air
throw
garbage in the right place.
and
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And
help police
to arrest
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arrest
those people who are destroying the rainforest.
On the other hand
,
government
should take some steps to save
environment
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the environment
.Nowadays, many developing countries are becoming
industrializede
made industrial; converted to industrialism
industrialized
.So
,
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,
the factories and industry are greatly polluted by fumes and gases.In that case,
government
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the government
could introduce laws to limit emission from factories.
Also they
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Also, they
could impose green taxes on drivers and airline companies.
government
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Government
should
also
invest money to renewable energy from solar, wind and water power, and they
also
camping should promote recycling.
in
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In
conclusion,
environment
is a great and significant results in our world.
in
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In
my opinion, it is important to protect our
environment
.So
government
and individual should take responsibility to protect our
environment
.

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