The line graph shows the number of population shows TV and Radio from october -november 1992.

The line graph illustrates the

number

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of

audiences

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(over 4 years old) enjoying audio and television in

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day

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the day

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from October -

december

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December

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1992. Time

are

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measured in

with

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apply

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2 hour

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2-hour

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interval and population

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measured in percentage.

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, the

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of

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audiences

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were

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more than the Radio

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. The

days

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starts

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with

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equal

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of

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and Radio

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but after

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time passes the

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of audio

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increased significantly

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as

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time passes the

amount

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of

TV

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audiences

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increased rapidly and

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of the

day

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its

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decreases

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sharply. With regards to the

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amount

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of

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audiences

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at 1.00

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it was 5% - 10% of

population

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the population

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watching

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and within half

hour

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an hour

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its

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decreases

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. At 5.00

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the

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TV

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audiences

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increases

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slightly and gradually falls to under 5% at 11:30. From 11:30 the

number

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of

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watchers rose to 15% at 11:30 and from that as the passed the

amount

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of

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audiences

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rose gradually to just under 45%at 21.00

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and

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steeply to just over 10%

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of the

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.

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, at the beginning of the

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the

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of audio

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is under 5% and remain almost unchanged at 6:00

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. From 7:00

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the

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of audio

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rose sharply to 25% and

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gradually as the passes. At 15.00

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there was an increased in audio

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for 3 hours and it

decreases

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again slightly and ends up as like as the beginning of the

day

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at just under 5%.