The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.

The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart illustrates the
total
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free
time
, spent in a week by
the
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people of different
occupation
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occupations
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during the year 1998 to 1999. The total
time
measured
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is measured
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in
hours
per week. Different occupations are
full
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full-time
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time
,
part
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part-time
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time
employed, unemployed, retired and
housewives
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housewife
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.
Overall
, The unoccupied and past employees spend more
time
, which is almost equal. It is obvious, In women
full
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full-time
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time
employee has less leisure
time
compare
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to
part
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part-time
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time
employee. There are no males, in
part
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part-time
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time
employment. The other category housewives
,
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account to The
third
among the five.
Females
have a number of free
hours
compared to
other
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others
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.
Firstly
, the jobless male has spent more
number of
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leisure
time
, which is around 84
hours
, followed by ex-employee gents they account for 83
hours
and
similarly
78
hours
spend
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spent
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by
females
in both levels, who spend almost the same and
second
largest
in
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overall
.
Secondly
, In
part
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part-time
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time
and
housewives
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,housewives
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only
females
are
females are
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falling into
this
profession
who
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accounts
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accounting
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for 40 and 50
hours
respectively.
Lastly
, working professionals
has
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have
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little free
time
which makes up 43
hours
for males and 37
hours
for
females

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.

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