Human activities have had negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that it cannot be changed, while other believes action can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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It should be noted that the environment is claiming
for
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to
help since human activities are destroying the natural resources, including animals and
vegetetion
all the plant life in a particular region or period
vegetation
. In fact, there is a
controversal
marked by or capable of arousing controversy
controversial
controversy
discussion related to the real possibility to
change
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this
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situation.
On
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In
my point of view, is never too late to start thinking out of the box, and
change
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human behaviour through social and
comportamental
divided up into compartments or categories
compartmental
actions and projects. In
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essay, it
will be discuss
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will be discussed
both views.
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, in our current society, is
understandble
capable of being apprehended or understood
understandable
understandably
that hope is decreasing, taking in consideration the wars, politic status, economic progress and the bad human
comportament
a space into which an area is subdivided
compartment
comportment
associated with others humans and the nature. In a world like
this
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, is
more easy
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easier
to stay the same than
find
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finding
ways to
change
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this
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mentality.
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, generally people think that one
individual
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individual, change
change
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will not cause a relevant impact.
On the other hand
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
defend the idea that nature needs to be preserved by us, and we have the obligation and
responsability
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
to take care of others forms of life,
such
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as animals, plants and
ocean
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oceans
the ocean
. I
beliave
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that the
change
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start
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starts
with
ourselfs
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
first
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, and
then
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, we can teach others to copy our example. The best way to
demostrate
give an exhibition of to an interested audience
demonstrate
to someone how they can help, is being their inspiration. It is true that the amount of
demage
the occurrence of a change for the worse
damage
damages
is high,
however
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, at the same proportion, our little action can cause a huge impact all well.
In addition
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, we have our children, that are more open to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
new ideas and concepts of life.
Basiclly
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Basically
, they are our hope and future, and due to
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fact, we need to be their heroes. To conclude, a good example of human
change
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of
atitude
a complex mental state involving beliefs and feelings and values and dispositions to act in certain ways
attitude
attitudes
is the vegan
moviment
a change of position that does not entail a change of location
movement
, that includes the
animals
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animal
protection, and preservation of nature.
Also
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,
this
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moviment
a change of position that does not entail a change of location
movement
is about reduce human meat consume and increase the use of vegetables and fruits, helping the global population to
impreve
to make better
improve
improved
health.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Irrevocable damage
  • Urbanization
  • Deforestation
  • Pollution
  • Habitat loss
  • Extinction
  • Industrial development
  • Conservation efforts
  • Wildlife protection laws
  • Public awareness
  • Sustainable practices
  • Renewable resources
  • Eco-friendly technologies
  • Biotechnology
  • Restore ecosystems
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