Write a letter to an employment agency. In tour letter : Introduce yourself. Explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have. Write at least 150 words

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Dear Sir \ Madam, I am writing to you looking for a

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part-time

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part- time

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part-time

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job opportunity

in the beginning

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let me introduce myself , I am a twenty-one years old student at

faculty

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of business administration at Cairo university .My term finishes on 15th July and I will be free until 15th September , I am looking for a job in

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period .

Last

summer I was worked in a large restaurant as a waiter , I met tourists from all over the world and

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let me gain my English practice and I have more knowledge about different cultures. I am able to

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for a long time . I am

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working two years later in a reputable hotel as a room serves , I can cleaning room and changes blanket and beds covers. Thank you in advance and I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future. Ahmed sahwky

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

155 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to an employment agency. In tour letter : Introduce yourself. Explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have. Write at least 150 words

The Closing

Topic: Governments shoud spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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