Drivers should pay a fee in city street when there is a heavy traffic. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

With easier access to sedans,
increasing number
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an increasing number
of private vehicles appear on main streets, creating traffic jams during rush hours. In some regions, authorities have implemented regulations of charging fees
on
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for
these roads. In my perspective,
this
may not bring positive effects.
To begin
with, road pricing could be advantageous in a degree. These fees could be collected by local governments so as to contribute to other purposes.
For instance
, the revenues could be used to upgrade the existing public transport systems
such
as construction of new metros and design of new bus lines, making it convenient enough for commuters to give up their private vehicles and choose these methods to go to work. Profitable though the pricing system might be, it may impact the economy negatively. As extra expenses have to be allocated to transportation, drivers who are less wealthy may be under
higher financial burden
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a higher financial burden
, less money being able to be distributed to daily necessities
such
as garments and
foods
benefit
goods
, as well as leisure.
Consequently
, diminished purchasing capability would reduce the sales and production of numerous companies, which could hurt multiple industries, which could even result in an economic crisis.
Additionally
, road pricing may not ease the existing traffic congestion in
cities
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city
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
. With rapid urban sprawl in
this
era, major businesses are all located in
downtowns
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downtown
, while residential areas are
farther
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
expanded
to
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into
suburbs, which means that people flock into
central districts
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the central districts
in the morning and flee in the evening. In many cases, the public transport systems in these suburbs are not advanced, forcing them to drive their sedans to work. Additional charging on main streets may not alter their commuting habits.
As a result
, decrease of the number of vehicles on
street
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the street
would not be significant, which would have been one of the initial
goal
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goals
of carrying forward these policies.
Instead
, more attention should be paid to facilitate the public transport system. To conclude, as paying extra money on roads might influence the economy rather than ease the heavy traffic during peak hours, I personally hold the view that no more fees should be charged on roads.
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