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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara desert or the antartic. What are benefits and disadvantages for tourists to visit such places?

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Nowadays, travellers are paying visits to
deserted
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desert
 regions. As much as there are many advantages to doing
this
,
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,
there are
also
 drawbacks which include the period of draught experiences there and extreme cold which can lead to death. One major benefit of tourists journeying to the Sahara desert and
Antarctic
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the Antarctic
 is to gain
indebt
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in debt
 and verified knowledge. People who give true stories are the ones that experience the situation firsthand
hence
 what the travellers do.
In addition
, it helps them in developing write-ups for future references without
such
 people visiting the place to know more. One major drawback is that
such
 deserted places experience very harsh weather conditions, thereby making it tough for human beings to cope there. When the sun has reached its peak, draught can set in. Getting water is
such
 a dry land is near
impossible especially
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impossible, especially
 if one has exhausted all the reserves taken there.
Moreso
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More so
, due to the unbearable atmosphere it creates
,
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,
when excess cold sets in, blankets and places of shield are difficult to get
,
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,
however
 causing survival to be tough and
this
 can lead to death.
For example
, it was discovered by a scientist in 1990 that 97% of people who embark on visits to secluded places rarely
comeback
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come back
 alive. In conclusion, there are numerous drawbacks attached to tourists who go to places extreme weather conditions,
however
, it has fostered and helped to develop truthful researches without individuals who refer to it in the future worrying about embarking on any trip to know how verified the story is.
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