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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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People have different views about whether or not
work
 on school projects with a group. Some believe in
team
work
 while others don’t.
This
 essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail and
rivide
furnished or strengthened with ribs
ribbed
 evidence as to why working with a
team
 is superior. On one hand, students who
work
 on school activities
with in
internal to, not outside; located in the bounds of
within
 a
team
 get desirable output due to effective ideas. When they
work
 together
,
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,
 they get several ideas as more number of master minds involved.
For instance
, if 6 students are brainstorming
together
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together, then
then
 each one will come up with
atleast
Suggestion
at least
 2 or 3 different approaches so that a productive design can be developed.
As a result
, due to diverse thought processes, desirable outcomes can be achieved.
Also
, students who
work
 collaboratively can enhance
teamwork
 skills.
Now a days
Suggestion
Nowadays
, jobs demand
this
 quality and in an interview they check
this
 by throwing random case studies.
Consequently
, parents want their child to develop
this
 quality and send them for
team
 assignments workshops.
Hence
,
teamwork
 skills are important to attain desirable output in the projects and
also
 to succeed in the future jobs.
On the other hand
, Students who
work
 alone becomes independent. They
work
 alone starting from idea generation to end output results.
Infact
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In fact
, they have full control of the final product which gains them self confidence.
For instance
, in
recent survey
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a recent survey
recent surveys
the recent survey
 by Education Organisation
,
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,
it has been declared that
,
Accept space
,
 students who
work
 alone are much more independent than
work
 in a
team
.
In addition
, students who
work
 solitary can be more flexible with their working hours. They can
work
 in rigid timings. If it suits best to
work
 in the evenings or on the weekends a person working on his own can make that choice.
Thus
, students who
work
 alone are much more independent and
work
 on their convenient schedule. In conclusion,
Although
 working alone makes student independent and can choose their flexible working hours, working with a group enhance
teamwork
 and results an effective
outcomes
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outcome
. In my opinion, it is more beneficial for students to
work
 in
team
 not only to get higher results but to enhance
teamwork
 skills. Having said that, parents and teachers should involve students in collaborative
work
 to build their overall growth in near future.

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