Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages.

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Most of the Foods we purchase and consume are processed by the use of chemical substances

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known as additives or preservatives. In my opinion, while there are some setbacks of

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, its many benefits

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as spoilage reduction is a major factor to consider. Admittedly, a major consequence of preservatives is that it has allergic reactions in a few.

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to say that some individuals could have skin irritation, headache, palpitation and selling.

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, some may experience digestive disorders

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as diarrhoea and intestinal upset.

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, there could be serious health issues

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as cancer and lung disease. These substances could trigger already existing health condition.

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, I once met a patient who had breast cancer and

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was worsened

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of consumption of uncooked noddle’s Spice.. These

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the demerits of chemically preserved food.

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, there are

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the benefits

of keeping food safe with chemicals as compared to the drawbacks. One of

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is that it makes food

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longer and retain

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the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people

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, it preserves the fresh need. A recent study by a group of microbiologists has shown that, it reduced the risk of infection because Foods can

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longer without contamination. Another positive

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side to this is that

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is that it provides nutritional benefits. It

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saved cost for both the producers and consumers. In conclusion, while part of the cons of preserving Foods with chemicals include heart problems, its numerous

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is healthy Foods makes it better than any demerit it has.

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Do the dangers derived from the use of chemicals in food production and preservation outweighs the advantages.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

Some people think that detailed criminal description on newspapers and TV programs has bad consequence, so this kind of information should be restricted on media. To what extent do you agree?

Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?