In many countries today, people buy a range of household goods ( television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) Is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a great number of electric appliances were used in household,
as television, microwave, oven and rick cookers. The impacts of it should be considerate. Personally, I think the positive effect is more than the negative effect. The major advantage is that the high technologies of those appliances provide people an efficient live.
For instance
, using the wash machine
is saved
has saved
time in cleaning clothes. If the wash machine was not invented, people need
to do
all processes by themselves, include putting water, adding laundry powder, cleaning clothes, which spend hours.
, the machine
people’s hands by doing all the steps in an auto way.
Therefore while
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Therefore, while
the devices do their job, the time which was not enough to wash clothes could be spent on multiple things. As the result, the living efficiency of
is improved.
On the other hand
, when more and more electric equipment
are used
is used
the house
, the using of electric power would increase, and most of electric power is produced by fuels.
, that growth will add the CO2 in
an environment
the environment
, which is the main reason of climate changing,
as global warming.
situation would not
for long when nuclear which is replacing fuels becomes important as energy resources.
For example
, the electric that powered by nuclear in France was doubled in ten years, So the disadvantage of it will lower in future. In summary, I think while the negative impact of numerous household goods (television, microwave, oven and rick cookers) is decreasing, the positive side of it is more.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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