The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Please agree or disagree?

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this

letter to stay with your family to take care of your children. I hope that you will be definitely happy about my caring for your child. I saw an advertisement on

last

week. I am fond of to play with children.

Moreover

, I really enjoy

this

job because of no much physical work.

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, I need an accommodation for a long time. I think

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work will suites well for me. Earlier, I was working as a teacher in international school. Even though, I had an experience as a baby sitter. While teaching in schools, I teach mathematics and science to all my students. I don’t have big free time to involve in other activities. Because, I was a busy schedule with my part time tuitions. Now, I have a plan to study higher education through online. Meanwhile, I can teach children academic subjects and well take care of the house. You can trust me about caring your children. I appreciate if you choose me to take care of your children.

Tue Aug 13 2019

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

e-commerce
brick-and-mortar
physical stores
online retailers
retail apocalypse
digital economy
consumer behavior
sustainability
commercial landscape
high-street
consumer trends
augmented reality
showrooms
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Please agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving neighbourhood or teaching a sport to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some culture, children are being told that they can achieve anything if they work hard.What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobsdescribe your new jobtell him/her your other news

Solving environmental problems should be the responsibility of international organization rather than each national government. Do you agree or disagree?

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?