In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

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Growing working class has resulted in a huge requirement of new homes to be constructed in
vicinity
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the vicinity
of the job, but since most of these areas are mega metropolitan areas there is hardly any room to
accomodate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
new homes
,
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,
so there is no other option but to expand into the
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country
rural regions
countryside
side
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.
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many believe that the
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country
rural regions
countryside
side
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should not be polluted by the expanding
population
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, there is no other way to provide new area where facilities and homes can be built upon. Some argue that our
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country
rural regions
countryside
side
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is where we grow our food and cannot be used up for new homes. When an area is converted to colonies of homes, the resources like ground water and rich soil
that is
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required for farming is used up. With the growing human
population
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, there is
also
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a growth in food demand and
this
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cannot be met when the agricultural areas are slowly being converted to colonies of human
population
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. Thanking the advancement of medicine, the ever growing human
population
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also
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needs more place to live. With the increase in human
population
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, most people want to live in areas that are close to their work and where the facilities are ample. If the
country
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sides are not developed to house these needs, the buildings will only have to grow vertically and
such
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a situation cannot be environmentally viable, as
this
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tends to take a lot more resources of the location. There is a need to find more land that will cater all our needs.
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Until
then
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the only way is to continue as we do
now which
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now, which
is moving the
population
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into
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country
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the country side
side
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and moving the
country
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side
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into
to
being one more than one
two
forests and eventually moving the forest life into zoo parks.

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  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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