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In Modern era,

use

of automobile increase day by day. Many nations

payout

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pay out

so much money to construct

bicycle

use

easy with

full stop

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a full stop

. In

this

eassy

an analytic or interpretive literary composition

essay

easy

issue

, we will discuss about the reasons of making bicycles and

solution

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solutions

a solution

to tackle with traffic jam. There are multifarious reasons, why government

promote

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promotes

the

use

of bicycles.

Firstly

, automobiles emit a lot of harmful gases, which is the main reasons of rising in temperature called global warming.

Secondly

, automobiles

runs

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run

with petrol and diesel. Which will

be cause

for the reason that; on account of

because

loss

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the loss

of our fossil fuels forever.

For example

a study

have recently conducted

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has recently conducted

in 2016 and reported that we should

lost

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lose

our natural resources permanently in

future

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the future

Moreover

, bicycles

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are

eco-friendly maintain cost very low than

automobiles everyone

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automobiles, everyone

who is financially weaker can

also

afford the

bicycle

Furthermore

, it is good for Physical

health

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health, for

for example

, the men and women who are

very very

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very, very

busy in their work and don't get time for workout can get advantage of

bicycle

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the bicycle

. In other hand,

Government

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the Government

have

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has

very good strategy to control the pollution. By using

bicycle

the traffic

jams

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jam

problems can

also

tackle

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tackle, for

for

example in

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example, in

Montreal,

government

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the government

promote

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promotes

the

use

bicycle

and provide

supported

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support

supporting

bicycle

stands by charging very low price for their

bicycle

take very less space on the roads as compared to cars trucks and other automobiles. In conclusion

Accept space

government provided

good way

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a good way

to control pollution by using

bicycle

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a bicycle

bicycles

. It should adopt by all the countries as it

also help

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also helps

in solving the traffic congestion.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28Grammar mistakes
 

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254 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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