It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Many people think that the
punishment
of the children is the best way
to teach them to be a good person. This
essay disagrees with this
, because the children who was punished when they was young, they may grow up with a depression
. A better way
to teach them is giving the love
and talk what the true and false.
Initially
, the punishment
is the popular kind to teach the children in many countries, but it is not a good way
to teach them. If the children was punished, then
they will punish their children in the future too. Furthermore
, the psychological studies reported that the children who be punished, they have the most probability to be a depression
, and in some case can have a suicide. My online friend, for example
, her mother hit
her every morning, when she was young. Suggestion
hits
This
affect to her at present, she has a depression
while she was only 13 years old. This
is a clear example that the punishment
is a bad choice.
In contrast
, the love
and talking is better. The teachers and parents can give some hug
to let their child know about the love
, they will receive and give the love
to the other people too. If they are angry or annoying, moreover
, the hug
method is not positive effect, the parents should be calm and let them alone just a moment. But during that time the parents have to stand near by them until they can control their emotions. After that, the parents should talk with them about the cause and reason why you have to let them calm down with their self, and also
demonstrated the right and wrong things. For instance
, the Broken series in Thailand, it is relevant to the student who has a problem from the parents divorce. The teacher, Kru Sai is a psychologist, use these methods (separate the angry children, and give a hug
to them) then
the children can control their emotions more than the past.
In conclusion, the children who be punished may be a good or bad person. Even the most of people opine that is
a right way
, but the punishment
can cause the depression
too. From those examples above, I agree with the other way
, such
as a hug
and love
, is a better way
to teach them.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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