It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Many people think that the
punishment
of the children is the best Use synonyms
way
to teach them to be a good person. Use synonyms
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, because the children who was punished when they was young, they may grow up with a Linking Words
depression
. A better Use synonyms
way
to teach them is giving the Use synonyms
love
and talk what the true and false.
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Initially
, the Linking Words
punishment
is the popular kind to teach the children in many countries, but it is not a good Use synonyms
way
to teach them. If the children was punished, Use synonyms
then
they will punish their children in the future too. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the psychological studies reported that the children who be punished, they have the most probability to be a Linking Words
depression
, and in some case can have a suicide. My online friend, Use synonyms
for example
, her mother Linking Words
hit
her every morning, when she was young. Suggestion
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affect to her at present, she has a Linking Words
depression
while she was only 13 years old. Use synonyms
This
is a clear example that the Linking Words
punishment
is a bad choice.
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In contrast
, the Linking Words
love
and talking is better. The teachers and parents can give some Use synonyms
hug
to let their child know about the Use synonyms
love
, they will receive and give the Use synonyms
love
to the other people too. If they are angry or annoying, Use synonyms
moreover
, the Linking Words
hug
method is not positive effect, the parents should be calm and let them alone just a moment. But during that time the parents have to stand near by them until they can control their emotions. After that, the parents should talk with them about the cause and reason why you have to let them calm down with their self, and Use synonyms
also
demonstrated the right and wrong things. Linking Words
For instance
, the Broken series in Thailand, it is relevant to the student who has a problem from the parents divorce. The teacher, Kru Sai is a psychologist, use these methods (separate the angry children, and give a Linking Words
hug
to them) Use synonyms
then
the children can control their emotions more than the past.
In conclusion, the children who be punished may be a good or bad person. Even the most of people opine Linking Words
that is
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way
, but the Use synonyms
punishment
can cause the Use synonyms
depression
too. From those examples above, I agree with the other Use synonyms
way
, Use synonyms
such
as a Linking Words
hug
and Use synonyms
love
, is a better Use synonyms
way
to teach them.Use synonyms
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